My tresure

What is my treasure, I think it is my family. I have father, mother, and two brothers. Owing to my family, I can live now. If I don’t have family, I can’t live now. My family support me at mental and money. When I do bad things, my mother scolds me. When I do good things, my mother praise me.　Now I live far from my family, but sometimes I back to my home. Now I understand how delicious my mother's cook, and how fun talking with my brother. My father is always freedom. He likes to drink alcohol. And He likes to gamble. But he always make me laugh. I want to be a father like him. My older brother got marriage, but the oldest brother not yet. Maybe he’ll get marriage soon. Maybe they will have children, and the children will be new treasure of mine. And another treasure is my friends. I don’t think I have a lot of friends. But, the quality of my friends is very high, I think. When you talk about your friends, the word “quality” should not be used, but they support me when my mind downed. So I want to say “you’re high quality friends of mine” with my respecting mind. This is my treasure. (214)